Mist Pre
! My poem reworked, hope you enjoy it!?
Ok, I already posted this poem, and after some coaching, I re-wrote, I hope you all like it! ~ ~ Comfort Refer You lost me, the world has forgotten me lost, abandoned, I rejected condemned to die alone, a tribute to anything entangled and trapped by the darkness Shrouded by mist ice of despair I cry My one small flicker of light and hope through the mist (of life) death I have not failed in its embrace of love I Relieved is at rest my weary soul in peace now, I find myself still in darkness envelops it, covering my being like a leaf Pure no longer visible to the world that never liked ... ________________________ So, What are your thoughts? To answer some questions pre-1. I 'm not emo 2. I'm not (completely) depressed teenager. (We all have our moments) 3. I'm not suicidal
☺ its very good .......... just a bit depressing but good
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